As far as anime goes, its alright. Fight scene are cool, voice acting is well done and its already 216 times better than Misty/Chronexia one. You did all the animation by yourself? Top of my hat to you. I hope to see more of it in the futur, even if i know this probably take a really considerable amount of time.
Reviews for "( Original ) Nesia Legend of Cosieda Episode 1"
BestofNesia responds:
Thanks! And yeah, all the animation is done by me. As far as the time it took, I had quite a few issues with getting voice actors for it and also a big one where I almost quit completely due to bad issues at home, but usually I get things done fast and have been complimented on that a bit. As for the story, it seems bad at first glance since I like to keep people guessing a little to much. I most likely will what's happening easier to make out since people seem to have a hard time with it.
Yea, so I would put my feedback in order like this:
Font: Stay more simple.
Animation and dynamics: Glorious!
Voice acting and writing of the dialougues: Done to carelessly. Every word has to be precice and set with the purpose of the viewer understanding the world, the story and / or the thoughts and feelings of the character. Some of the dialougue seemed pointless to me "Lets end this party." it is important to have characterising sentences, but the voice actor needs to be ble to bring life to these terms. To say them in a pace that feels natural for the character. Also I think that the boss dude from the "good guys" (?) should look older and more classy judging from the dialouge and voice intented for him.
And I think there has got to be more build-up. A chance to understand the world.
Background Animation: Sometimes we need an overview of the place, like you did with the crater. It goes for cities as well.
Well, there is much to improve, but also a lot of things which are quite nice. Enjoy your work
it was okay, the font used however was kinda hard to read.
Yeah, the voice acting is off mood and too overacted. the tone of the voice acting is off to the tone of the story.
But the concept is cool.
wow