A spot o the random! this definitely had some real random to it.
AND YES EVERYONE IS A CRITIC! Oh you had to sneak that on in, didn't ya?
This was REALLY REALLY good. I didn't see it as perfect but this was amusing and worth watching. You did well with running gags and even overlapped them in some odd ways. And a running gag involving a running joke, pretty damn funny.
I got to say while this one was like two steps up from stick figures the joke delivery was there. You made this one happen. I have to commend you on that alone. It really had some funny jokes peppered through it. It was just a hint sick and a bit twisted. Nothing about this really was over the top in a good way.
You came close to nudging the last half star out of me.