It can be very difficult to tell a story without any dialogue. I think you've done well here setting the scene.
Reviews for "Travelling Deity - Part 1: The Ruden"
Very nice
The effects are pretty good in this I especially love the opening video likeness, and some really fun characters and an adventure looks like you really have something awsome here with some intense moments really nice talents showcased here hope to see more.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of this magnificent element
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It's alright.
Why did you feel the need to have an intro and credits that take up more than the actual story. Sure the animation is great, but seriously!