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Reviews for "Roommates - Monster Mini-Mayhem"

Every day i keep getting review notifications on this cartoon that are long 0 star reviews and the next day i check back and the same people have a new one because you or whoever else has been reporting them. You should probably check who that is and remove them from the project or something.

Also i don't think this is very good. First couple times watching it i thought it was a huge improvement for you but honestly the only thing you really improved on since the last roommates episode was just frame by frame. I used to pass off lazy looking art as a style but sometimes it really isn't. Drawing all of the humans the same and then not being able to draw anything else very good isn't a style, it's just not knowing how to draw. The voice acting has always been bad, some aren't good at acting, some are literally just talking into a mic and not actually voice acting, and some have piss poor quality. The story i'm indifferent about, some points are paced fine but i feel like the parts with the worst pacing are the actual important parts, especially when the villain is first revealed (also the villian's body exploding and his brain being put into an animal's body is just ripping off Evil Con Carne except with a dog.) Backgrounds are fine enough and some of the jokes weren't even that bad. I feel the only thing i can really say about this is that you shouldn't work on cartoons 24/7, you should just work on the things that people have been telling you for almost 2 years. Work on art, colors, writing, pacing, characters and voice acting. I can tell you put effort into some of this because you worked on it for a year and kept going even when you were past your 3 deadlines, but still. Also, the roommates intro hurts my ears i would legit prefer Kevin McLeod music or even the shortened version.

I don't even agree with some of the reviews that have been deleted, but like what's the point of uploading to newgrounds if you or whoever is just gonna delete everything that isn't 5 stars?

FlowJoe responds:

<3.

heyyy buddyy... take down my review cause i gave it no stars? well sport, here is 5 whole stars :) ( i really voted 0 for the real vote though)

lmao maybe thats why theres only 5 star reviews here, casue you deleted any criticism lol.

ill jjust leave the most important part of the deleted reviews:

think about ur cartoon, and go ask some adults, or actually ask a few different age groups, and see what they like and say about it. im very serious when i say you will want to take this down later on in life. unless ur retarded

FlowJoe responds:

https://youtu.be/oP9Ag5aoE6I
Anyways, I can't even delete reviews on Newgrounds. I like constructive criticism, I always want to keep improving my stuff! That's all I have to say. Have a nice day, buddyy!

Wow, this is very good! Loved the animation and story, especially some of the jokes. This is like something I would see on TV! 15 minutes of excellent entertainment. I need to check out the rest of this show sometime soon. Keep up the great content! :)

FlowJoe responds:

Thanks! More content is definitely on the way!

Loved all the video game references like super mario world, sonic, super smash bros melee, paper mario, and all the rest i didn't catch!

there's always a big leap in improvement in each episode by the end of roommates you're gonna be a pro

FlowJoe responds:

i sure hope so!