The story is great, especially the "little girl vs panicked villagers" trope :D
One little thing though: it would have been nice if there was a door leading outside and a bed or hammock leading to sleep, so at the beginning you wouldn't feel like the fire is the only object ever.
Also, a window in the middle of the room that shows whether it's morning or evening.
But nevertheless it was a cool experience, keep it up!
Reviews for "Home"
I really do like how this links to Journey Home. But, perhaps there could be something different added into this, like maybe we can play the short quests the adventurer goes on. But otherwise, good work!!
This is a bit short but still a great game,I'd like to see more from you
A charming story with moral choices and a beautiful sound track.
After helping the miners, You spelled "reward" wrong. Only flaw in Your game. I'd LOVE to see something more out of this, maybe a bit less linear, with several quests you can pick up, or to decide to stay and train the girl or help the alchemist. Also naming the characters would make them more lively (they already aren't bland, but one'd thought that after agreeing to shelter someone in his house he'd leard their name) Music great for me, never felt like looping annoyed me. graphics were next to nonexistent, but what i saw- i liked. Once again, I- and i thing not only me- would be happy to see something bigger made out of this concept, world, and characters. I'll follow You so i won't miss it if You'll release sth more. P.S. If my grammar or vocabulary had any flaws, I'm sorry, but English is not my first language.
Raius responds:
Thanks a million for playing! Yeah there are definitely a few typos in there that I missed, thanks for mentioning it. I've made two more games which are similar and you might like them. The Journey Home is already posted here and Millika Village is my most recent one but I can only post 2 things a day on newgrounds so I'll have to post it tomorrow. Both games are really small and simple but hopefully they're something like what you're hoping for.