This one was pretty good. You added some interesting supernatural and cryptic plot devices which are nice. I really like how you leave hints in the scenery of different locations. I really think this story has the chance to be your best one yet... Just thinking of all the details you could change with the use of time travel. You can have characters do a complete 180 in their
personality because they grew up; and something like, the future student council ruined their lives. In the form of a flashforward instead of a flashback This way you could have big twist from characters nobody suspects. This one has been great, all the details that developed in this episode. Julius's parents, now we know it was future Julius who saved them on the train. The cryptic message on the locket was cool i’m going to use the dial you showed in the textbook and use it on Juliu’s locket I hope there’s an easter egg here that would be soooo cool, but it’ll be just as interesting to find out that Julius’s parents had their own variation of the caesar cipher I’m really looking forward to the next one.
Reviews for "Phantom Reverse #4"
MORE, PLEASE!
I LOVE this <3
I didn't 100% like the 3rd episode, but this one was great keep it up ;)
Another good one. Much better than the third one which is the only one that's left me a bit disappointed - but this one made up for it. By the way, none of those bands on the posters are even close to death metal but I'll let it slip since you got some good ole Bay Area thrash metal in there with Slayer.
Keep up the good work!
thanks! lol i just went off google for the bands srry
Yes, I put my name as "Mybutt" again. I saw Gumball in a commercial in the movie theater so I was really in the mood! The music was great. I managed to get through this. Then again, maybe there was no way you could lose. I loved them yelling, "MYBUTT!!" over and over.
I don't want my butt's arm to bleed. Anyway, the animation was as good as ever. I love the "Receive Medal" thing at the end too. I was able to get into the story. Well, my laptop is slower.