The timing of the humor is 100% spot on. I don't like comparing indie shorts to mainstream stuff, but it was just as sharp as South Park was in its prime. Great job!
The timing of the humor is 100% spot on. I don't like comparing indie shorts to mainstream stuff, but it was just as sharp as South Park was in its prime. Great job!
Really funny,
Great story.
The stick figure character designs bothered me at first, but towards the end I didn't mind them.
That was pretty great
It was funny, but you grossed me out a bit. Now I can't finish my breakfast. :(
I'd would come have with my book.