Not as funny as #2.
To be honest, Kagome's voice sort of irritated me at points, particularly with Flonne.
You are both incredible voice actors and I find it impressive how you can perform in so many ways, but the voice of Flonne in particular irritated me thanks to the overly cheery American accent.
That's something which is pretty subjective though.
I'll be able to tolerate it.
I don't like the way you use the word 'anyways' either. But again, that's personal opinion.
The white edges are now totally gone, which is nice.
If you're willing to continue improving the character sprites, I suggest you remove the jagged edges, specially on Vaharl when he's angry.
I don't like the way you sometimes have the Lemingtan's servant open his mouth, sometimes not. It's needlessly inconsistent.
La la la laaaaa lalala (I love that interlude tune.)
I was amused by the green dude in the bar, but it wasn't quite as entertaining as the previous one for some reason.
I'm interested to see the whole thing pan out though.
Had graphics and everything been yours, I would have probably given it an 8 overall. Instead, I give it a 6.
Graphics - I think you did a nice job cleaning up those characters. But you can still improve it by taking away jaggies and changing the font I think.
Sound - would have been an 8. Taking your involvement into consideration, I give you a 7.