Saying the same thing more politely than the rest
Since I always read reviews before I submit my own I have fallen into the habit of applauding and criticizing the work and the reviews of those that have come before me. One LARGE piece of advice to those who critique others work, QUIT RAGGING LIKE YOU WERE KICKED IN THE NUTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My God! Whiners, thats what most of them were! A lot of them compained of spell checking and I must say they need to use it as well!
I liked the piece though it was to short by far. I felt more like I was watching a teaser trailer for something rather than watching a part of the story. The shortness does not account for it more than the lack of integral parts missing that a story needs. Probably everything was explained in the first part and I will look at that (and enjoy it) as well but the set up for the next piece was not done well.
For you telling everyone you drew it with a mouse I found it to be good work though others obviously have a different opinion. I know nothing of flash (yet) and would hate to see what these same people would say of my artistic talent when I do submit something.
As to the sound thankfully there were subtitles. Maybe I was not watching hard enough and didnt watch it completely the second time but I found only a few spelling mistakes and the lack of an ' was telling. I will NOT come down on you as others did but I really would recommend you correct that.
All in all I liked it and cannot, for the life, of me understand how people get off acting like a cry baby drill seargent when reviewing others work. While most had valid points those points were lost in the self righteous seeming anger they expressed at the same time. I will be watching the first one and all others that come to be. Keep it up and work at improving and you will have a great presentation for what seems a great story.
