disturbing....
a) that wasnt very funny b) the lighning noise in the back ground was to loud. c) it wasnt funny
Reviews for "Phil the Demon"
hey, it doesn't sound so bad...
meh, if this was supposed to be funny, sorry, cause I'm not laughing too much.
Good.
It was cool but Phil's voice was gruff and the background sounds (Screaming guy and lightning) kept on interupting it. Needs more humour otherwise good series.
Not bad at all, I'd like to see more
But yeah, I agree with the last poster. You need to chuck in some more humor and do some more hellish research. Dante's Inferno is a great piece to read for inspiration. I'd also suggest Faust by Goethe. This series has some great potential. Good luck with it!
nice, but it could've been better
I liked the flash main idea, but I think the author could add more things. Try reading Dante Alighieri, lots of horrible ways to punish people =)