Not Bad
The only down side that I could spot was that the guns when looking from side on were normal pistols with a clip but when looking from the front of the guns turn into revolvers. This seems like a pretty dumb mistake, but the story an most of the graphics were pretty good.
Good.
This is a pretty good series, but it begs the question, how are all these murderers going to escape the law?
Not very exceptional, various problems
Alright so we understand that there was a lot effort in this shearly from its size. But we also see that this contain a lot of inconsistancies and things that don't make sense. Like the woman aiming the gun at the professor's head. It changes from black 9mm to a sliver/blue revolver. People don't scream after they get shot in the head. Getting a gun into the air port is nearly impossible even in a waiting area. Listening devices don't blink. Yuta and the woman with green eyes were in love but aren't they related? I assume that the data pads detect DNA patterns of the family you think with that kind of technology they wouldn't to shoot at each other with projectiles. Speaking of projectiles why doesn't any one wear a bullet proof vest? Where are the police in all this volience? What type of pshycotic family makes their own members go around killing each other?
The formula? How does one even concieve of masking your own DNA? Why can't they just get along? The money? How do you put money away for such a long time and then expect people to just start killing one another for it? I know that people are nuts for cash but damn. I guess I am ranting well nice job with the length of the moive.
wow i actually watched it all
I sat through all of that, so now i feel i have earned my right to review.
First of all, the first thing that comes to mind when I think of the bad parts of this animation is the lipsyncing. That was drop dead terrible. You REALLY need to better your lipsyncing, in some parts it didn't even look like whoever was talking was actually talking. The second thing is the voice acting, not like I was expecting anything different for something anime, almost all anime animations have those same voices. Except for the black haired girl, she had a different voice, which is why I gave the sound a 2 and not a 0. Other than that, sometimes the characters didn't look very natural or right or whatever, for instance, at the hospital, the black haired girls breasts looked a bit weird, I had to laugh at that. Another thing is the poor script writing, sometimes you had one or two words of dialogue that were out of place in a scene, or seemed just to be there to make it painstakingly obvious what was going on, for example, the part where the branch falls when the two women are fighting, and the black haired one says "poison" was out of place (or at least I thought) and was unnecesarry. There were several places where I found this happening, but sometimes it was actually quite funny, hence the Humor score. You know, you don't have to be like Xin Session. You have the power, early enough in your series, to make something actually interesting with good animation, where Xin Session failed. I can already tell you know how to animate, the animation wasn't too bad, lots of movement and action, but I'd like to see some improvements, ESPECIALLY with the lipsyncing.
Horrid...
The good...
Not much...
The bad...
The art is horrible, the sync is off, the animation is either too slow or too fast, and the music doesn't fit at all.
You, sir, need to work more. I've seen some of your stuff before, and it was much better. Everything is either framed too fast or too slow when you're doing animating. The mouth is just so white blob that moves freely when the person is talking. You need to stream your sound instead of keeping it on event.
It's just a large monologue with a bunch of people with horrible voice acting shooting each other.
Work more. This stuff is horrible.