It's great, ignore all retards who insult you.
This was well done, OF COURSE THERE'S GONNA BE NEEDED IMRPOVEMENTS IN EVERY DAMN FLASH MOVIE!! Do you realize the time and effort a person needs just to create a flash???? Whoever gave this a bad score does not realize the difficulty of creating a flash as good as this. Even drawing the freaking flash may prove difficult and may even take weeks!!! As the guy before me, IT IS MORE THAN EXPECTONAL!! The only non-expectional thing around here is your level 1 gold members account with no flashes created.
Jesus christ, learn to respect and admire people's hard earned work. You don't have to like the actual content, just dont talk crap when you're watching a fine piece of art. I, myself, know nothing of how to make flashes. Just learn to RESPECT PEOPLE! Whoever said that this was a rip-off, well f off please because you don't need to be insulting people.