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Add easter egg of lita getting in to the ring now
Reviews for "Axe vs Line"
Not bad but not good either...
This flash could really use a better soundtrack, and maybe longer than what it is right now, because it's too short. It really doesnt make any sense at all so that kind of let it down because I prefer things that have a good storyline, or are able to be understood without much thought. What does the monkey even have to do with the axe randomly flying around trying to cut a line? And where did the spaceship thing come from either?
Thats all I have to say...
ShortMonkey responds:
The monkey is there because I, ShortMonkey, made it. ;)
good one
I think the choice of music was good but I also thought it was too short good animation on the axe too and nice preloader and intro 3-5 I'd say.
Here you go!
I appreciate your submission to Newgrounds! However, I must say 3 things about this flash.
-Pointless.
-No plot.
-Decent graphics.
Graphics - I appreciate your attempt at graphics. Those are the graphics I like, simple, but not stick figures. *Twitch* I hate stick figures some times... ANYWAYS! There isn't much to tell you about your graphics except to try and make different copies, making it 3d, and make some other backgrounds rather than flying stars(?).
Style - I loved your ingenuity! An axe attempting to chop a line that gets away! (and then turns into a sword) The only thing that I think that took away 2 'points' was the random ship blasting them both. Try to stick to a plot.
Sound - Good song, but that was it. Try to input sounds according to the actions... unless I didn't hear them. I can't remember. ><
Violence - I judge normally on three things:
-Blood & Gore
-Fluidity of movement
-Frame Rate
You had the PERFECT frame rate. You did good. But make the violence longer!
Interactivity - You had a play button. Good job. However, I can only give you a 1. This isn't a game. Sorry! ( It isn't personal, buddy. )
Humour - Not much humour, except the ship who blasted everything. Pwn3d...
Overall - 5 on the 1/10 scale.
TOTAL - 24/ 60. 40%
UNDER AVERAGE
Good try! Make it longer, ALOT longer, and keep up the good work!
ShortMonkey responds:
Thank you for the great review! I tried it with sounds but it failed with them. :(
hmmm
it was decent would have been better with more creative fight secens