Cool
Nice animation, but this would only be good if it was your first animation.
Reviews for "Axe vs Line"
Here you go!
I appreciate your submission to Newgrounds! However, I must say 3 things about this flash.
-Pointless.
-No plot.
-Decent graphics.
Graphics - I appreciate your attempt at graphics. Those are the graphics I like, simple, but not stick figures. *Twitch* I hate stick figures some times... ANYWAYS! There isn't much to tell you about your graphics except to try and make different copies, making it 3d, and make some other backgrounds rather than flying stars(?).
Style - I loved your ingenuity! An axe attempting to chop a line that gets away! (and then turns into a sword) The only thing that I think that took away 2 'points' was the random ship blasting them both. Try to stick to a plot.
Sound - Good song, but that was it. Try to input sounds according to the actions... unless I didn't hear them. I can't remember. ><
Violence - I judge normally on three things:
-Blood & Gore
-Fluidity of movement
-Frame Rate
You had the PERFECT frame rate. You did good. But make the violence longer!
Interactivity - You had a play button. Good job. However, I can only give you a 1. This isn't a game. Sorry! ( It isn't personal, buddy. )
Humour - Not much humour, except the ship who blasted everything. Pwn3d...
Overall - 5 on the 1/10 scale.
TOTAL - 24/ 60. 40%
UNDER AVERAGE
Good try! Make it longer, ALOT longer, and keep up the good work!
ShortMonkey responds:
Thank you for the great review! I tried it with sounds but it failed with them. :(
Quick and violent
This a very fast paced flash. I quite like it, even though the axe blows weren't quite timed to the beat of the music, I still feel it worked well.
I'm not sure about the explosions at the end of the piece, as they just tended to be a little too numerous and also the detail just didn't feel right for me. Try zooming in, to give you greater control of the pen and you could make the flames look a little smaller.
Are you thinking of doing similar random flash at all, or is this it?
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ShortMonkey responds:
I'm making a sequel that I think is coming along well. :) Thanks for the great review!
K
^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty smooth. Some cool FBF action and nice coloring of the different items throughout. Nice sound effects as well.
^^Needs Improving^^
A lack of storyline really hurt this. I just couldn't get interested in it just seeing a random ax fighting a line.
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ShortMonkey responds:
Thanks for the review! ^_^
good one
I think the choice of music was good but I also thought it was too short good animation on the axe too and nice preloader and intro 3-5 I'd say.