im not done with you ye- SUPRISE!
if you can pump them out one a month then im might be ok with z:uo being on hold good jokes and the end was great.nice credits btw
Reviews for "WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1"
Nice.
This is actully really good! Looking forward to the next one.
Yo, well done dude.
Kept my attention throughout the whole things, the characters are interesting, the subject throughout was also interesting, great voice acting and most importantly, the animation was top notch. The comedy was rough in some spots so it wasn't exactly comedy gold, BUT it was at times hilarious and I truly had a good time watching this. Thank you dudes.
God Bless.
Good job
I really liked this flash and the ending was epic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lots of guys below me have said most of the stuff i would say for improvements, so ill sum it up my thoughts:
(pros)
+Nice character drawings
+decent animation for a first flash (still lots of room for improvement)
+Nice backgrounds
+good music
++Very funny slap-stick (physical/hitting/fighting) comedy
(cons)
-Voices, though not bad, seemed alittle mono-tone (you dont have to be too over the top, but just enough to not some soo "blah blah blah". Just say the lines with more style. hope that makes sense
-Could work on joke delivery
-Try to shy away from too much needless random humor (e.i. "My butt itches", "My gives me gas"
(suggestions/observations)
+/- Maybe think about having a female side character to for a nice change of pace (doesnt have to be a part of the main group of guys, but just someone interesting to throw in)
+/- Try to change backgrounds a little at school after a day has passed.
Well that's it. I hope that helps (and i hope i didnt seem too harsh ^_^). This looks like an interesting series, and id love to see how you guys' VA and animating skills improves over time. Keep practicing and good luck in with your future projects. Peace.
Ah nice :3
Ah, good old Scoot never disappoints, honestly, I like this better then the ever awesome Zelda series. Though I have to admit, with my somewhat isolated homeschooling life style, I am just a tad jealous, curse you people and your good times! and curse your Shinai, a sword shaped reed of bamboo is only so fulfilling xD where do you even get one of those.... Ah well least it's fun to watch x3 I look forward to more ;3