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Reviews for "The Guardian Chapter 2"

very nice game

very nice retro gamepla, it looks like you put a good effort indeed, now...where is conrad's? grandpa dude tells me to go to conrad's I walked to the left till some guy told me to kill some trolls, wich I couldnt find either, then I decided to go south of grandpa's and found the shop and then the blacksmith shop at the docks but no conrad's.

some sort direction pointer or maybe a compass would be of great help.

Cool Game.....nice work...:)

bu t no badges...thats bad.....:(

You did improve greatly over your last game

I gave you a 5/10 in your first game and told ways to improve you did listen to me and did improve the game.

The game is great but you seriously need better game testers they did a mediocre job.........
It is a shame really this game is really great but the lag kills it and loading each time I get lag is annoying.

You did a half ass job in the script of the game:
When I saved the people in the pub they all said the same exact thing when I was going to save them and after I save them

Also npc felt like they were not aware of what was happening in the story?
Example I saved the parents and the kids said the exact same thing and they didn't notice their parents waked up.

Npc should change what they say when I progress in the story not say the exact same thing

You really need to work on the story or get help from a writer.
You know like in the library I could go and read books about the story of the game,the guardian legend, types of monster descriptions etc
that way the game can grab people deeper into the game.

I wanted a skill like in zelda when you hold the attack key you do a special attack that would be nice.

I loved that you made the npc scared inside nightmares they breath heavily and they eyes tremble in fear

Stuff that were missing in the game that you promised:
There were only 12 islands not 13
The last boss only had 3 forms not 4
The last boss was disappointing I only fought the 3 bosses again no new special boss.

I got all equipments they were very nice but I wish I had some of them earlier not after I had the 3 lantern pieces.
Like I could get the goblin sword before getting the lantern.
Also I can get all equipment after the other after getting the lantern.
It would be best If I could only get them only after I progressed into the story not all after I only had the lantern.

Next game add more different backgrounds like
Volcano area
snow area
desert area
jungle area
etc

Add different races (zelda had fish people -zora, desert people-gerodo,town people,elf,goron, minish, bird people)
different areas with different cultures
like asian culture with asian type palace,egypt culture, a tribe in the forest, european castle etc

Just work on making that game world comes Alive! with details I think that what truly makes an epic games not the graphics.
Those games trap you inside the game and you feel part of it, feels like you living an adventure.

I know I said a lot but I wrote you a guide to make a perfect game beyond zelda =P
I got a black egg in the inventory what is it for?
I am missing something extra in the game?

UknownXL responds:

I loved your review and I will take it to heart. If you want to pm me and talk more I would definitely be willing to listen. These are all things I wanted to accomplish but as a fulltime game developer things have to be taken out and before you know it things are not what you meant for them to be. I like all the ideas you stated also.

Badges

it need badges badly:P.

Lagged, glitched, trapped = disappointing

It seemed to be fun at first, but as I continued playing the lag increased until all get frozen and I had to open a new browser.
The controls stop obeying. I tap any direction and he keeps walking like if I was holding the button, or shooting continuously.
There are too many people speaking pointless thing that wont help you. I hoped to upgrade my armor as the game go on but after too many time I realized the wood stuff would be the only thing I would have.
For my infortune I got trapped in the dungeon where the woman is on the cage hanging from the ceiling because I had no key to get into the left room or free her and there was no way out, going back didnt work at all and the game auto saved there, what means that gameplay is lost forever.
It needs more hidden secrets, the enemies are too weak and the bugs - like the one that ruined my game - must be fixed.