This was great, the story had me entranced. Looking forward to prt 2
Reviews for "Unfortunate Girl:TWO pt.1"
The beginning when she saw that ghost creeped the heck out of me.
Is the genre to the story supposed to be horror, or is it just a drama type thing?
I don't care which, the storyline has a lot of potential. Good luck with the upcoming episodes!
WTF in first part Shon was a dick and he dosn't want to hang out with Karisa becouse she was cursed. :O Is it a prequel to the story? Steel amazing. I know my english is horible. You know I'm from Poland and I'm drunk as fuck :*
TheFabs responds:
I intended for that VERY first episode to just be an experimental entry into the series I wanted to make. I had never done flash before, but I really wanted to make this story I wrote forever ago called 'An Unfortunate Girl' a visual thing, so I tried it out. The whole first ep thing is basically me trying to be WEIRRDDD and SPOOOOKY and doing it badly, BUT with that being said, it does still fit into the story, just in another realm I suppose, because that whole episode is a nightmare built from her fears and anxieties. Shawn is a dick in that episode because that's what SHE fears. She doesn't want her only friend to turn on her. Now that I have improved a bit with storytelling and animation, I can actually try to build the actual characters as I intended them to be instead of taking the easy way out and making everything IN YOUR FACE WEIRD/SCARY like the first episode. Both the episodes before this make me cringe and sorta laugh at my skill levels at the time, BUT I suppose they both contribute to the story so I keep them up for all to see! Hope this helps.
there is so much potential in your ideas and I hope you make the best of it. its great to see something different, always keep that in mind
to all those wondering about karissa's conditions...
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /551683
Just watch the first episode =P
FAAAAABS!!! i'm so glad you're alive! HURRAH!
TheFabs responds:
Woop!