You forgot to give her eyes.
Reviews for "Unfortunate Girl:TWO pt.1"
TheFabs responds:
Nah.
Watched this in the completely wrong order. This is one of the most amazing things I've seen in a long time. Story is fluent and phenomenal, every little detail you put into work is not unnoticeable, you TheFabs are an amazing animator! This is not opinion, this is fact! Your talents belong on some sort of tv series, but I think I'd rather see this story ride out. Please continue, but never lose sight of having fun and animating your story.
-Josh
I don't get it. This is later than episode 1 I take it? Even so, she is reintroduced to her best friend? She looks older than in episode 1 and also Shawn and her knew each other before her parents died... so what happened?
I tried looking at it like it was all a dream, but it didn't look like that.
TheFabs responds:
Just keep this in mind: The first ep was kinda an overview of a bunch of events in the story and not necessarily in chronological order, just really really badly done (Sorry) and as for the looking older thing, uh, I just couldn't draw when I made the first episode. My bad.
The series will be told in logical order now with the exception of some flashbacks ^^
scary!
Part 2 is out!
Link: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/624687