Wow Dana, you've gotten REALLY good.
The first one was appropriately moody and atmospheric with some decent animation. This one is also atmospheric, but with even BETTER animation. The lines are a lot smoother and I love the character designs and shading. The actual animation is also very nicely one.
This really has me interested and I can't wait to see the next part. Keep it up! You're only gonna get better so I look forward to seeing the next one.