Haha all those references. Nice work man, whoever says your artwork sucks is wrong. Btw I couldn't find the astronaut (and I replayed like 5 times)
Reviews for "Dead Detention #2"
keep up the good job m8 btw who said the artwork sucks shout have probably thaught about his/her mom when she made him/her first ....
Feels like the pace has really sped up with this one! I like how the mini-games now have time limits and aren't quite as easy to complete as the last round, but still not too challenging. Not so sure I like the frequent '15 minute later...' transitions though, or how the teacher's bitten so fast you haven't really had a chance to gain sympathy for her yet, mom on the phone and then, it's done. Plot's not bad but the pace feels jumpy somehow, whereas the last-edition jumps were usually for the fun/random. Anyway, looking forward to part 3!
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JackAstral responds:
Thanks! Very good points- I'll try avoid time jumps more in the next episode. I didn't really notice that I used them so much until now :b
The old artwork was better. Much better, in my opinion.
At least the mini-games got a tiny bit better, than before.
Actually, there is now several times more action in them, as well as the story.
JackAstral responds:
Thanks! I'll try improve the art work a little more on episode 3
There should be another male character in ep 3! there is a harem forming up!
JackAstral responds:
Ahaha true! Thanks for the review!