NEED SEQUEL OR WE WILL TURN INTO ANGRY ZOMBIE. haha good game. the blonde girl remind me of kirino from oriemo.
Reviews for "Dead Detention #2"
>_< Searching for the hidden Golden Astronaut Medal.
Wow, this second one is much better than the first. The plot is thickening, and the humour is great too!
All rigth... was more entertaining that the last one... good hidin place for the rocket btw
Aw snap, my review from last episode got quoted in this episode :|. Don't sweat it too much though, the artwork fits both episodes perfectly fine, eye art included depending how you were portraying the teacher (I say you hit the nail on the head in that respect). I miss not seeing any eye color on any of the characters though, especially Naomi, her blue eye color was very good in ep. 1. You should do similar eye art for the others, it would look quite nice. Completely white eyes could fit certain emotions too though.
Artwork aside, I certainly like that you added a timer for the interactive bits and made them difficult (higher rating for that :) ), but this episode felt like it went too fast. Maybe you could have Max talk about anime more often or have conversations with the other characters? Maybe you could add some easter eggs too, like if you tried calling the wrong person in the cell phone scene. And of course the music was good too.
Keep up the good work with ep. 3! However, I'll recommend against quoting any NG reviews, it takes away from the game itself (unless perhaps you have one of your characters turn it into a good joke) and can embarrass whoever said that. (and to everyone else who might read this, I wasn't the only one that commented the way I did about the artwork. Criticism happens, but this time is more constructive I hope).