This game is cool but dang its so sad
Reviews for "Chaos Girl"
the story was good, it reminded me of many other animes I've seen but nevertheless. As an artist myself I have to say you could've done a little better job on the drawings, if you make a part 2 to this perhaps try putting forth more effort into your art work unless you wanted it to look like that and if that's the case then to each is own.
I had the most fun with this game, simply by calling myself "I'm horny"
The sound effects sounded silly. not like actually being punched, just someone making a pop sound with their mouth.
But damn dude. that story.
This was an amazing game Jack i love and support you. Plz make a sequal to this game keep up with the great work!
I really liked this (I don't want to call it a game because it barely is) story. It uses a very good combination of music and visual text and/or pictures to make the audience feel. I loved the art style, despite its inconsistency at times. The multiple endings were all very emotion-filled, and I was moved by all of the 'bad' endings, and felt involved with my character, which is very good. The only problems that I have with this game is that the 'bad' endings are very similar. This doesn't withdraw from the experience and I loved them, maybe next time, it might be an idea to keep them different. Also, I could see the start of the code when it went to input my name, which may not be the author's fault, since it may be the software, but it annoyed me a little. Also, I didn't like the way that the blood effects were just overlayed onto the screen. I thought maybe you could use different pictures of the same people. I was in love with the characters, the story the art style the music. It was an awesome way of representing a story. I think that this would make a great manga series and anime TV show/podcast. I would definitely consider it, because despite the slightly convoluted plot and unanswered questions, it was a really good use of my time. You might consider going into story writing. However, if you do, please get a good proof reader, because I did see some spelling errors (I think). I adored it as an experience and would love to see more of these.