I'm gonna be honest...The art, storyline, and characters were really bland and mediocre. There's all the time in the world to improve on writing and drawing, but this is pretty bad. The characters didn't even have faces. I know you can do better- try to take some time to practice your craft if you really enjoy what you do.
Reviews for "Chaos Girl"
i wish there was a real novel about this, its interesting
wow....just....wow...
Amazing! I really liked this, GIVE US MORE!
Way too basic, I think. The story is way too short and doesn't really have enough of any of the components that make a good visual novel. I couldn't really feel for any of the characters - the main character has no real reasoning behind his actions, so he's just a set of skin that the player puts on and wears. The girl and the main character's friends are generally rotten and selfish without much background to explain their own motives. Moreover, the 'take the bullet' choice is so transient because it doesn't really affect the plot outside of the predictable outcomes of who dies.
I guess it was nice enough that everything wrapped itself up quickly, but there just isn't any artistry here. After 10 minutes of clicking and reading I died twice and got a kiss on the cheek. Seems a little empty if you ask me.