The animation was absolutely fantastic-however the comedy wasn't quite there (for me at least)
The punchline was pretty obvious from the beginning and I think that took away any potential it really had for "shock humor."
I think perhaps the joke would have stuck better if it focused more on the "oh god..I'm dead" aspect. Yet again I'm not entirely sure if that dark or humor was really what you were going for.
Regardless-it was very well made so I gave it 4 stars! Only thing I could critique was the comedic timing seeming off..but I could understand how shorter could be better with animation-especially if it's a one off joke.
But I digress-looking forward to more from you in the future!