I'm so excited to see you back with another minisode of Dead Detective! The writing is excellent as always, great characters again too (you can't go wrong with a good bit of Margh and Ghvnn though!) and another great mysterious case to crack.
I really can't offer too much in the way of improvement suggestions, because everything is perfectly charming and great as is! All I can say is I'll definitely be diving into the full game when it comes out =) keep up the fantastic work!
Oh, and here's part one of my playthrough, an honour as always! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqO1mmsXSW4