Girl, if this is your first try that was good
My recomendation for your video it's try to not abuse of images, if your intension it's to make a music video, then you should use less time, to use more variety of animations, that'll help you to make a better flash, and it' wont become redundant. If you have problems with color's tri to use the gray scale images as ypu did with some part of the video, if the intention was to make a serious part with the dreamscape you should try to use a first person view in that way you wont' have to make a complete animation fo the room backwarding, becuase what you get it was a funny position of your character.
well I hope this help you. see you.