I'm at a loss.
I'd love to say that it was grand, but in reality there didn't seem to be much substance/reason for the character to be running for tomorrow. There's not much reason for the girls to exist other then set pieces of the play, but the use of black and white and everything else in the show seemed like you needed a deeper understanding of the song, which made it completely uninteresting.
Which is why it comes down to inaccessibility, for me. I could never connect with any of the characters because the song can't portray them any differently than what you've drawn those figures as. With no set up as to why they needed rainbow socks, good shoes, or etc. it seemed like a mass parade of drawings with animation and recycled techniques.
Ignore me if you wish, but in the end, it wasn't all terrible. What you did wasn't terribley easy to do, since flash isn't terribley easy to work with. So cheers.