This is INCREDIBLE. My only counsel is this: KEEP DOING WHAT YOU ARE DOING, because I don't think that you could improve this much beyond what you have already done. I really can't offer constructive criticism for this because it is already so good; and if you were to do what I would do in the making of this animated short it would no longer be your story but mine instead.
HOLY SNAP THAT WAS GOOD!
Reviews for "Donaji & the Magical Poncho"
Shi-Gu responds:
I think there's always room for improvement, but I do appreciate your understanding of this being a personal story.
Thankyou very much, I'm really glad you like it!
Wao lince, te quedo rikolino, eres la poia con ceboia +11 prro
estuvo genial todo, me encanto la animacion, y los personages, aunque algunos tuvieran nombres todos como revueltos (al menos que sean basados en contrapartes reales, cosa que no se)
Shi-Gu responds:
Gracias!
Tanto Iztlacoliuhqui como Chicahualizteotl son verdaderos nombres de dioses en Nahuatl, el idioma de los "Aztecas"/Mexicas.
This entire thing is Nintendo material.
Shi-Gu responds:
Now THAT'S flattering!
An inspiring story, and beautifully animated too! With lessons to be learned, fiery explosions, crisis, conclusion and happy ending... with mysterious after-credit glimpses at what might come/was/is? The web comic seems like an interesting idea too. Definitely has a unique premises, exotic scenery and characters I'd want to learn more about. Off to a great start!
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Shi-Gu responds:
This is so great to read. Thanks a lot!
Hope to count with your interest and support from now on! :D
Colorful, enticing, mystical, this had it all. The different scenes really showed the full repertoire of the artist and their ability. Can't wait for the webcomic.
Shi-Gu responds:
Thankyou!
Will work hard to bring it online soon!