Interesting and for the most part unique as well as having pretty nice artwork.
I'd say the best thing to focus on in the future would be to maybe try and extend the game-time because for me it was a bit short. Another thing would be that it's not exactly in depth and is a bit confusing on how things in it tie together, and it seems that a lot of the parts aren't explained partially or at all which might have been what you could have been going for to try and place the Reader/Viewer in a more immersed experience.
Other than that it's not too bad.
Reviews for "Chaos Girl"
Interesting I like the idea! Also kind of weird to hear one of my old songs ha! Nice job keep making games like this!
10/10 Changed my lyfe ;-;
I hate to say this, but this is pretty much terrible in every way.
The story doesn't really go anywhere and the main characters consist of a blank slate and another blank slate who also happens to be a psychopath. I can feel no sympathy for the "Chaos Girl", as she first murders two people for being slightly dickish (No, it was not done in self defence, and you did have other choices), and then proceeds to murder a number of people for no reason. The relationship between the two main characters has less pretext than mario and peach. I mean, she doesn't even know he was going to help her.
Aside from the story, the art was at best average and at worst an overlay I believe you found by searching blood spatter into google images, and the music was... meh.
Really, I hate to bring you down like this, but visual novels are really not for you. Stick to ... anything else. You receive one star for effort, and best of luck to you.
I got ending 4 my first try and its probably the happiest of them all :P