maaaaan this really makes me wanna make one of these; it would be a perfect medium for me... damn it curse my lack of skills...
Reviews for "Chaos Girl"
I really don't know what to say besides its great and sucks at the same time. What I mean is that its starts off with the blue hair kid saving Amy that enrolled a few weeks ago and this is where the first problem arrives because she said she enrolled to hide from these guys that were chasing here. The problem is that they seem really strong or have a lot of influence to send a police force since they seem like a research group and also if they were that strong why did it take them a "few weeks" to finally catch up to her I mean look at her a few seconds and she kills two guys and I got to say that's pretty dangerous for her to be left alone for a few weeks in a school also Ash where SPOILERS (seriously I feel I shouldn't since this game is super short) he dies after he clearly A. puts down the gun and B. the blue haired kid clearly said "he's my friend you can trust him" but Amy still kills Ash any ways which is just really dumb or when Ash shot the blue haired kid that was his supposed friend also WHERE DID HE FIND A GUN! Lastly the art which is really ehh to me. What I mean is that the arts not that bad but still bad.Its like me making a big cake but say "ehh i'm not gonna put frosting on it cuz yeah" and I have seen Dead Detention which has faces on the characters despite how the characters are drawn. Also (even though I said lastly) I see that Amy likes the blue haired kid but I mean come on you just met the guy seriously but yeah.
Some good things are the Art. Despite how terrible unfinished it looks I feel like I would like it if they at least had eyes and mouths at least. Next is the story which I have to say does peek my interest how a guy helps this girl who has crazy powers escape an evil organization but its confusing tha she says a bunch of I think Japanese words like one was "Seishin Kurai" which has no meaning which is fine but its weird. Other than that I feel that this story could either take a turn for the worse or take a epic rise and I hope to see that epic rise.
The golden astronaut is placed in the upper-left corner of the gym.
where is the golden throphy?????
The writing was... nothing I can accurately describe without coming off as 'overly insulting'. Though for sake of clarity my two biggest gripes were the abysmal pacing and cliche ridden narrative.
sub par visuals and a sub par story make for a sub par visual,novel.