This was superb! I absolutely loved it!
You've done a great job and I hope to see more games like this one. I really liked the retro feel to it and the reference to Monkey Island. Truly well done.
Just two things to take into account, both mentioned before:
- the evidence questioning thing: it's rather pointless to click that much when you could just try to ask as much as possible before going back to the dialogue.
- the loading of previously saved games. I played it on Firefox for a few minutes but I had to go. When I returned and wanted to finish the game, I was unable to do so: it just remained stuck on a black screen.
Well done, man. I'm a fan of your work! If you ever want to do a Spanish translation for your games, I'd be glad to help!